I'm telling ya man, The first one was better. this one had a few parts the other didnt that are cool, but gun to my head i would say the first one is better.
i would get a different piano sound for the lower notes in the beggining. it works for the higher notes
not being a douche here, its just constructive criticism. but your trying to remix/cover an already amazing song. it would take a lot to top it. probably more than most people can do, so my advice is instead of making the same song, make a techno remix of it. completely change it up while using the same melodies. this song in particular would make a great trance song.
Well I enjoyed the song, so I just decided to give it a shot at remaking it. I find your criticism useful, I recently started going through my songs and I might just do that.
Not bad, not bad especially for your first submission. Bit of advice though. There is a few parts where the sound completely drops and your transition between some of the noises could be easier later in the song. A few parts in the song thats just singing is a little too soft. I think a light background noise at least would be good here. But hey thats just my opinion. GL on your future endeavors my friend. *thumbs up
P.S. I probably would have given you another star had i actually liked the original, lol. Though that part at the end is a little catchy, especially after hearing it on amv hell so many times.
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